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Colli 07-13-2009 01:44 AM

I am President - Draw the Line
 
Hey guys

I dont know if this is the right place for this thread but i am looking for constructive critisism on a song my band has recorded.

Theres lots of things i want to change even after listening to it once.


Its a quick rock song - ive shortened it so you dont have to spend more then 2 mins of your time :)

all the best - great site!!

LINK BELOW :D

Colli 07-18-2009 01:54 AM

everyone is a bit shy.. :(

crash_override 07-18-2009 02:03 AM

Well, first of all YOU ARE SPAM SCUM OF THE EARTH AND DESERVE TO DIE!!!!!

Second of all, I was initially pissed that you interrupted my listening of the Screaming Tress, but then I discovered that your song sounds alot like Screaming Trees and I wasn't as mad.

Lastly, you mispelled Led Zeppelin on your Myspace page, which is pretty embarrassing.

Colli 07-18-2009 02:09 PM

Ok then mr spelling and spam police! Glad you didnt mind the song too much and the spelling has been corrected...everyone happy!! :)

someonecompletelyrandom 07-18-2009 02:26 PM

Love the vocal effects! The drums sounded a bit poorly recorded but overall great job.

EDIT: And by the way, you should stick around. :)

jackhammer 07-18-2009 04:11 PM

Spam die blah blah blah.

mr dave 07-18-2009 04:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli (Post 705857)
Ok then mr spelling and spam police!

if you think C_O is harsh don't ever try this on the other site hahahahaha

someonecompletelyrandom 07-18-2009 04:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jackhammer (Post 705938)
Spam die blah blah blah.

Enjoying the fact that you don't have to deal with it, or missing it?

jackhammer 07-18-2009 04:31 PM

Just a friendly alert for those in bold although standards are slipping already ;)

right-track 07-18-2009 04:47 PM

It's potential/borderline spam. No race to 15 posts for a link. Plenty here have myspace links. If he doesn't stick around and contribute, he's gone.

jackhammer 07-18-2009 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track (Post 705958)
It's potential/borderline spam. No race to 15 posts for a link. Plenty here have myspace links. If he doesn't stick around and contribute, he's gone.

I'm just messing a little. Christ I know what it's all about! nice to not worry about it!

right-track 07-18-2009 04:51 PM

You're not going to be one of those back seat ex mods are you? ;)

jackhammer 07-18-2009 04:54 PM

I'm missing the actual tidying up aspect already! Just not the contribution aspect!

right-track 07-18-2009 04:57 PM

Relax. You know it'll get done.
Must be frustrating though...

Colli 07-20-2009 01:32 AM

Ok guys - I never meant to upset anyone.
Secoundly - I have posted on other threads to contribute to the forum and I think its a great place and I will stick around.
Thirdly - this forum is called music banter...whats wrong with me posting up my own music?

All the best - sorry i didnt think this would cause trouble - Its certainly not a spam thread..if i was advertising WOW gold or something that would be spam!


hope everyone is well :band:

The Unfan 07-20-2009 01:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli (Post 706631)
Secoundly

Wow, you really are English.

Colli 07-20-2009 02:30 AM

Get a grip - I was typing fast.

Colli 07-20-2009 02:31 AM

and if spelling if the only thing you can comment on in a music thread maybe you should go be a teacher or something

gunnels 07-20-2009 02:45 AM

Don't mind him, trolling is just his way of telling you he likes you.

Colli 07-20-2009 03:16 AM

Oh good :) - I just read his signiture anyway lol! :D

The Unfan 07-20-2009 03:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli (Post 706660)
and if spelling if the only thing you can comment on in a music thread maybe you should go be a teacher or something

The only thing I can say about the music is that this is 2009, knock it off already. A billion other bands already recorded the same song and did it more justice.

Colli 07-20-2009 04:24 AM

Of course this is a rock song but we dont do it because other bands have already done it - im in a band because I love doing so and enjoy my music very much.

Are you in a band or anything Unfan?

The Unfan 07-20-2009 05:01 AM

I've been in a few, but am not in one currently. I've been looking to find one but I can't stand the local scene at all.

Colli 07-20-2009 07:55 AM

Stop trolling and get playing again...

someonecompletelyrandom 07-20-2009 10:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli (Post 706631)
Thirdly - this forum is called music banter...whats wrong with me posting up my own music?

It's not you, it's the other 4 million plus bands and musicians who'll leave a myspace link, ask for opinions and disappear forever. We have to have policies against that kind of stuff, or else this place would be as bad as 90% of the other music forums.

If you really want to stick around, start a songwriting journal and post your lyrics/music there. It's just troubling when somebody's initial motive in joining is plugging music. Cheers though.

Colli 07-21-2009 01:00 AM

I have just seen that lyrics thread I will do that then! :) Nice one!

The unfan your still the biggest troll ive ever come across and and you have managed to apear that way in 2 posts

boyslikegirls124 07-21-2009 12:08 PM

you guys have a great look, i love the look of your cd cover.

and the sound to me is okay, i'd listen to it :]

i like the lyrics too

you guys obviously have some talent!

Antonio 07-21-2009 12:22 PM

a bit of the same old stuff i've heard already, but you guys do it well. not a bad listen.

someonecompletelyrandom 07-21-2009 02:49 PM

The bassist has my exact same bass guitar.

The Unfan 07-21-2009 05:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colli (Post 707327)
The unfan your still the biggest troll ive ever come across and and you have managed to apear that way in 2 posts

You're going to have to try harder than that if you want to get in my sig.

Colli 07-22-2009 01:13 AM

Thanks for the kind words guys - still working very hard on a unique sound - Humbled though :)

Colli 07-23-2009 10:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Unfan (Post 707618)
You're going to have to try harder than that if you want to get in my sig.

I wasnt trying to though was I!!!!!


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