My (not very good) new song
 

Hey, how u doin. I used to play bass in a not very good band and am now writing stuff for a new band. If anyone is not busy could they give anopinion of my first attempt, its a 2 minute pop song with no vocals and shoddy mixdown but ull get the gist.

Its probably a good example of why bassists should never play guitar aswell. So what u think, any promise or just a bag of ****e?
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/danj222/new%20song-01.mp3


dunno if that works???

works now
 

i think

good effort but it sounds like a load of rubbish just shoved together in any order and the drums to be fair a shockingly mediocoure. but i thought u wernt meant to promote ure band in this forum.... am i right?