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DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 12:20 PM

7/12

This thread was so smart
Of Docsoft to come up with
Doc for president

Rubato 12-27-2011 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DoctorSoft (Post 1137585)
7/12

This thread was so smart
Of Docsoft to come up with
Doc for president

It's not difficult
all you need to do is count
why are you failing?

DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 12:24 PM

Where did I mess up?

Rubato 12-27-2011 12:25 PM

wait no, read it wrong
I thought it was doctor soft
seven out of ten

:p

someonecompletelyrandom 12-27-2011 12:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pedestrian (Post 1137579)
Still not a haiku mate.

Rookie Mistake

GOD, WHAT HAVE I DONE?!
Extracted the egg-beater
Whilst on high power.


8/10

Listen to Conan
Listen MusicBanter friends
Don't forget to rate.

Above 12-27-2011 12:31 PM

3/16 stone cold

Oh I want to be
Inside. This ain't no haiku.
I want nothing.

someonecompletelyrandom 12-27-2011 12:36 PM

0/10

Five, seven then five
A haiku is born this way
Just follow the rules

DoctorSoft 12-27-2011 12:42 PM

8/10 very informative

A haiku master
Maybe future president
Go, DoctorSoft, go!

Odyshape 12-29-2011 12:08 AM

6/10

A dying day done
mindlessly numb loser bum
the chum in a whale

Lisnaholic 12-29-2011 07:58 AM

8/10
Very rhythmic ! The first two lines are great, but I didn`t really understand the last one; is chum a type of fish or am I thinking of chub ?

Here`s one in that little-known genre, the cheesy promo haiku :

the FAIR album club
dusty box of strange music
needs noms to survive


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