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parakletos 08-31-2014 05:15 AM
Thought: When the night comes
 
When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

Janszoon 08-31-2014 07:46 AM
You wish to smell someone's chest?

Exo 08-31-2014 09:23 AM
Smells like fresh boobies in here.

parakletos 08-31-2014 10:37 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 1484043)
You wish to smell someone's chest?
Thought is kind of writing close to poems but I'm beginner, nice to meet you.

parakletos 08-31-2014 10:40 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Exo_ (Post 1484055)
Smells like fresh boobies in here.
May be smells of love:rolleyes:

Black Francis 08-31-2014 11:18 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parakletos (Post 1484025)
When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest


if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.

parakletos 08-31-2014 11:55 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Francis (Post 1484072)


if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.
I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.

Black Francis 08-31-2014 12:19 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parakletos (Post 1484077)
I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.
It's not just for songs it's also for poems.
Don't be afraid to post them just cause you're just a beginner we all have to start somewhere and we don't start by being great at it that's something you build up to once you start writing constantly.

im not a very good poet myself but i share my stuff and try to learn something from the critiques ppl give me.

FishlessExistence 08-31-2014 10:42 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 1484043)
You wish to smell someone's chest?
You... Don't?

GuD 08-31-2014 11:02 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parakletos (Post 1484025)
When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

ME TOO

WANNA BANG

CALL ME

;)

WD is a horny perv. been warned, you have.


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