The prog song I wrote as my history project...
 

So I am in 11th grade, and each quarter we get a history project. This quarter, it had to be on imperialism. So, my friends and I decided to write a prog song about the diamond baron Cecil Rhodes. I would really appreciate it if you took a listen.

There will be 4 videos: Act I, Chapter V/Intermission, Act II and Epilogue. You can find them all on my YouTube account, but here's the link to the first one.
YouTube - A Diamond is Forever Act 1

I am not trying to advertise or boost my cred on this forum. I just want to get everybody's honest opinion. I would like as much feedback and constructive criticism as possible. Please tell me what you think of it musically, lirically and historically.