Learning to rap
 

So I am learning to rap and want to persue a career in which I make music that a lot of people my age (teenagers) can relate to. I am trying to stay away from the casual sex and money, girls, drugs etc. I have a few samples written but I'm not sure if I am doing everything right. Any recommendations to help me become a better artist?

use big words in a story

Paint your face.

the secret to rapping is to rap about how good you rap

Also drugs and ho's. Oh! Be sure to tell people about how rich you are.

now you're just generalizing

Write lyrics which summarize classic Russian literature.

In Russian.