Feedback on something Im working on?
 

Just finished it about 20 minutes ago. Unfortunately I still must use electronic drums and do not have a bass, so that is all that's left out. So if you can take 5 minutes out just listen to it and tell me what can be improved (im sure most can).

It is called Stuck In the Woods Without Shoes *Thanks

I have to say I liked that a lot. Great rhythm, nice guitars (the rhythmic one and the wailing awesome solo one), and just easy to listen to. I think it's fine the way it is. I'll be keeping this good sir.

Thanks for taking the time :) I am constantly amazed the sound quality a little 100$ M-Audio Interface can give me on my ****ty computer

Yeah it's great quality. So you recorded it and then edited the sound?

Sounds really good RezZ! One thing I might suggest is trying a cleaner but wetter lead guitar sound, I think that might work better in a minimalistic song like this one. Just a thought.

No, just recorded straight into Sonar, then messed with panning and timing.

So...

wait wut.

Thanks zoon. And yea, I agree. I just got a new preamp so have been getting a little carried away with the effects lately :) Its hard not to, considering theres about 100 different sounds on it.

Maybe I misunderstood your question. You asked if I recorded it then edited sound. Yes, recorded using audio interface then edited in Sonar.

Ok that works, and it's still a cool track.

Just got a bass yesterday, and have been fooling with it all day. These wont be to great but I made up 2 bass lines and was just going to post them here if anyone feels in the mood to giving some feedback.

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Also a question to anyone willing to answer. I have been playing with a pick and also without. I seem to like the tone and feel of having the pick but will it hinder when I progress down the road?