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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2007, 05:56 PM
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Posted By SoulSoldier
The 2nd verse causes me the most problems along...

The 2nd verse causes me the most problems along with the repeating of the title throughout and I agree. It annoys and there lies my problem.
Thanks, some good pointers there that have given me a...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2007, 05:43 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,253
Posted By SoulSoldier
Thanks. I wrote this based around the...

Thanks.
I wrote this based around the title,from a personal experience.
The problem I have is I don't like the title, unfortunately the phrase crops up throughout.
I'm looking for an alternative...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2007, 05:27 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,253
Posted By SoulSoldier
I can post but not start a thread yet...so I hope...

I can post but not start a thread yet...so I hope you don't mind me putting this here.


My friends bedroom

Opening the door I enter in, respectfully,
The bed, still unmade from ‘that’...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2007, 10:01 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,385
Posted By SoulSoldier
You should leave it as it is. It's a perfectly...

You should leave it as it is.
It's a perfectly good word and fits well within the context.
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