Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-12-2009, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 675
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 01:39 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 675
A black dress - and one, single blonde curl. ...
A black dress - and one, single blonde curl.
Blue eyes - and a pair of lips I wish only to kiss.
Porcelain skin - and three diamonds around her neck.
Countless - the times I've tried to win her...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 01:35 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 675
Dirt clothes the floor -
dust erupts beneath...
Dirt clothes the floor -
dust erupts beneath naked feet
building colonies in wrinkled valleys.
Light, reflective - mirrored,
mimicing and blinding;
disguised by clouded corneas.
Disease,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 01:34 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 675
Aveneficus' Poetry Collection
Going to start keeping everything together as many posters have done. Seems to be a good idea, if only for organization. I'll start with something I wrote today.
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Are you lonely?...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-01-2009, 05:38 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 917
First In A While ((Untitled))
Dirt clothes the floor -
dust erupts beneath naked feet
building colonies in wrinkled valleys.
Light, reflective - mirrored,
mimicing and blinding;
disguised by clouded corneas.
Disease,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-23-2009, 05:10 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 2,602
I bolded it to show the slight seperation from...
I bolded it to show the slight seperation from the poem itself, yes i realize it is a line from a song, but it was running through my head that entire day, so i used it.
Thanks to everyone for the...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-11-2009, 04:58 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 3,764
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-10-2009, 08:22 PM
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Replies: 128
Views: 13,751
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-10-2009, 02:13 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 4,546
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-09-2009, 03:31 PM
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Replies: 36
Views: 5,010
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-09-2009, 03:21 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 2,331
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-09-2009, 03:14 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 4,546
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-09-2009, 03:12 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 840
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-08-2009, 10:46 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 840
A Burden in My Bed
thoughts/criticisms appreciated
A Burden in My Bed
Awakening in the dark,
A man struck a match.
The light flickered on his face,
Pallets of color escaping grey eyes.
He reached for a...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-08-2009, 10:41 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 4,546
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-06-2009, 10:16 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 3,141
all right well i read this before and didn't...
all right well i read this before and didn't comment. i guess that's because you were right when you said this is a common thing.
the whole thing was really just a rant poorly structured into a...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-04-2009, 11:05 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 4,546
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-04-2009, 11:05 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,475
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-03-2009, 09:37 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,475
Yes it has a meaning.
I wrote it about heaven,...
Yes it has a meaning.
I wrote it about heaven, and the constant question that I always ask myself, "is it worth it to get to heaven?"
I don't want to get into a huge religious rant because I could...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-03-2009, 01:07 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 4,546
I'm not normally one to come out and say that...
I'm not normally one to come out and say that lyrics suck or are awful, but this is bad.
First of all, love songs make me sick, and the line 'you're my little angel' was an awful one to base a song...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-03-2009, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 115
Views: 12,268
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-03-2009, 10:26 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 5,010
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-02-2009, 08:31 PM
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Replies: 36
Views: 5,010
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-02-2009, 08:27 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,475
A Quick Poem
Feedback greatly appreciated!
I eased through the gates,
Peter’s back turned away.
The foyer, gold, with inlaid diamonds.
A guise of what lies ahead.
The chapel is blessed in eternal fire,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-15-2009, 11:13 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 874
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