Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-17-2009, 12:56 AM
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Dead Darling Lyrics (Reworked, check back to...
Dead Darling Lyrics (Reworked, check back to first post for reference)
I've seen the footsteps of your ghost,
Through trees of loves lost memory.
They bring such pain to those,
of us who misuse...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-09-2009, 09:13 PM
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Replies: 20
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They gave me no direction as to what they want...
They gave me no direction as to what they want those 2 songs to be about. The lead guitarist has been pressed for time, so haven't really heard from him. I'm having a really hard time building...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-02-2009, 09:35 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Alright guys checkout my sig for the...
Alright guys checkout my sig for the link....bands unnamed atm, thinking of suggesting Nocturne if i get in. Let me know what you think of the instrumentals...listen to "New Song" and "Malutopia"...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-01-2009, 12:33 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Im back
Hey guys I've been swamped lately and havent had time to log back on. Decided to give another band a shot. I have to write some lyrics to 2 of thier songs and submit them to the guitarist. Could...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-22-2009, 10:21 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-04-2009, 11:19 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Dream Child
This desolate World so cold, ...
Dream Child
This desolate World so cold,
Why do we not listen?
Culled from the flock,
Sheep lead to slaughter.
Like a Hermit wandering the hills,
I'm laid to rest in the land of the lost.
...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-01-2009, 07:56 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Kiss the Serpent
Siren echo through the...
Kiss the Serpent
Siren echo through the Isles,
Maidens kiss the edge of water.
Homer once tread these giant's shores,
Tall men trample on hills of Nevermore.
The forests of night stir,
As...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-01-2009, 06:58 PM
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Replies: 367
Views: 59,556
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-28-2009, 02:22 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
The Room
In a Room, deep inside...
The...
The Room
In a Room, deep inside...
The dark recesses, of my mind,
Dwells a place of candle-lit purity.
We were alone, o so cold...
Such a sight, to behold,
The Illusion of dancing flames...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-27-2009, 09:17 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
These Thoughts Impure
These thoughts impure
All these women,
Calipso's vile breed,
Leave me with thoughts,
o so impure...
The chosen shall find pleasure,
Amongst all our sin.
Morals are left lost,
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2009, 10:36 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
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Forum: Rock & Metal
08-18-2009, 09:51 PM
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Replies: 422
Views: 50,847
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2009, 09:40 PM
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Replies: 367
Views: 59,556
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2009, 09:15 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Vermin in our Midst Lyrics
Vermin in our midst
They crawl through the night
with every intention
pissing us off
yet we still let them
Fester, and feed
and take what they need
without any remorse
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-07-2009, 12:23 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,738
Epic Songs
My favorite is Childhood. After you explained what the song was about it made perfect sense. I think you have a very solid foundation id love to see the others.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-07-2009, 12:14 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Summer-Poem
Summer
I see the moon dance off your tongue,
The night sky shining bright.
How the dim light makes you seem so young,
Like the years before have never arrived.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-07-2009, 12:11 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Insomnia-Poem
insomnia
Half smiling the moon mocks me,
With a grin so sinister it snares my whim.
And leaves me loveless and lonely,
Broken like a pile of bloody sticks.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-04-2009, 10:57 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 2,557
Ravenkin's Collection
Hello everyone, im new here and glad i finally found a place i can get my lyrics critiqued. I'm a singer/songwriter for a Thrash metal band and will be posting some new songs from time to time. ...
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