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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-06-2010, 05:32 PM
Replies: 559
Views: 80,662
Posted By BillyShears
Jesus man, you have incredibly long songs. I like...

Jesus man, you have incredibly long songs. I like most of them, but is there any way you could divide them or shorten them up and still get your point across?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-28-2010, 03:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,382
Posted By BillyShears
Your lyrics are pretty good, there isn't too much...

Your lyrics are pretty good, there isn't too much use of cliches and the concepts are interesting. Keep it up.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-27-2010, 03:58 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 4,520
Posted By BillyShears
I think some of your work is a little too...

I think some of your work is a little too lengthy...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-18-2010, 02:50 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
why thank you. :pimp:

why thank you. :pimp:
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2010, 01:30 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
No, they've actually all been terrible since, in...

No, they've actually all been terrible since, in my opinion, In The City.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2010, 01:29 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,779
Posted By BillyShears
You don't really need a second verse, unless it's...

You don't really need a second verse, unless it's to move the story along, you could just put in some instrumental breaks.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-15-2010, 03:55 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
Magic Box It does what you want it to do ...

Magic Box

It does what you want it to do
Need one more? It makes you two
It finds what needs to be more found
It looks like Thought and Feels like Sound

Chorus- It's a magic box
take a look...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-14-2010, 05:34 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,000
Posted By BillyShears
A moderator removed them, advertising isn't...

A moderator removed them, advertising isn't allowed.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-13-2010, 08:29 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
Inside-Out It feels as though I've been...

Inside-Out

It feels as though I've been watching my life
through spare eyes
like my mind's worlds apart
and my personality's a disguise

Things I want to say are held back
due to fear of...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-13-2010, 08:21 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,779
Posted By BillyShears
Best song you've ever written. it could use a...

Best song you've ever written. it could use a finishing line, not neccesarily a verse, but a final salute to the idea of the song. Which is a great idea by the way. Do you have a tune?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-04-2010, 05:20 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
Their Crowd What's this you say? It's an...

Their Crowd

What's this you say?
It's an exercise in futility
I practice twice a week to stay in shape

I'm trying to show I'm a human
though not important in their eyes
I'm equal to them...
Forum: Talk Instruments 03-04-2010, 05:12 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,471
Posted By BillyShears
4 words: 8 note rock beat. XD

4 words: 8 note rock beat. XD
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-19-2010, 07:53 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
I've got one that I'll be putting up in a while,...

I've got one that I'll be putting up in a while, and another in the works.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2010, 06:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 811
Posted By BillyShears
Do you have an idea what kind of sound this song...

Do you have an idea what kind of sound this song will have to it?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-15-2010, 03:05 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 3,064
Posted By BillyShears
Shortness doesn't matter. Bands have put in 50...

Shortness doesn't matter. Bands have put in 50 second long songs on albums and they've turned out amazing.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2010, 06:38 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,779
Posted By BillyShears
We sure as hell better do that sometime! It's too...

We sure as hell better do that sometime! It's too bad we didn't get a chance to practice together on time for that show.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2010, 06:36 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 3,064
Posted By BillyShears
I don't know if it's a poem or a song, but I love...

I don't know if it's a poem or a song, but I love this kind of repetitive lyrics, and I just read the song that makes a comment on religion (judgement, I think) and that's incredible! Also, when you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2010, 03:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 811
Posted By BillyShears
original line, thumbs up.

original line, thumbs up.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-13-2010, 07:45 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,779
Posted By BillyShears
I smell a concept album.

I smell a concept album.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2010, 03:14 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By BillyShears
Bless you.

Bless you.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2010, 12:43 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
Of which song? In the City or The Political...

Of which song? In the City or The Political Statement song?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 06:37 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
eh, I wasn't going to do any explaining, but I...

eh, I wasn't going to do any explaining, but I figured that there's always a stupid person somewhere out there...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:22 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
YOU MUST READ THE DESCRIPTION BEFORE YOU READ THE...

YOU MUST READ THE DESCRIPTION BEFORE YOU READ THE SONG (or you may believe I'm an idiot)

Here's one I'd like some input on! It's a joke song making fun of the people who right about the government...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:18 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,070
Posted By BillyShears
One that drew some inspiration from Bruce...

One that drew some inspiration from Bruce Springsteen's first few albums Called In The City

In a cafe in the city plays a band so indie that they don't even know they exist
they're tryin' to...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-07-2010, 07:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,620
Posted By BillyShears
This song is so bad that it is a guaranteed hit. ...

This song is so bad that it is a guaranteed hit.
I don't think I spelt Guranteed right. This song must be rubbing off on me with it's stupidity.
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