Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-12-2010, 07:29 AM
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Poetry "Left"
An endless sea of sacrifices,
Unexplained Pain, painted in faces all around us.
A matter of distance, between the sorrows
That lies in the dark, it drives us apart.
Your breath I feel so...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-24-2010, 04:36 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 962
Coward little boy
(please critique)
I stand there looking at her, knowing what I have to do
But my selfishness and stubbornness is tearing it apart
I could just say a single word, her life would change forever...
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