Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-16-2012, 07:51 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-12-2012, 06:12 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
I appreciate your input, and your constructive...
I appreciate your input, and your constructive criticism. I totally get where your coming from, and I know it's not my best, and it's a stretch. I was just trying to do something a little more fun,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-03-2012, 06:14 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
I appreciate it
Please try not to hate it based on my singing. I know I stink. But hopefully you can appreciate what I was going for
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-28-2012, 12:00 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
New Lyrics
I can take two shots of cuervo
And still walk straight as an arrow
All you gotta do is press your lips on mine
And suddenly I drank two bottles of wine
Someone ought to put a warning label on you...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-27-2012, 08:40 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
Thank you
thanks, I am glad you like it :) I have been trying to experiment with metaphors and changing up rhyme schemes, I am glad its working.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-22-2012, 01:39 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
Would like to get some feed back
Electric
From the moment I met you, I was magnetized
Your smile drew me in, had me hypnotized
You swept me off my feet with good old fashioned charm
In your arms I knew I would always be warm...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-20-2012, 02:03 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
More Song Lyrics
I don’t wanna be mad anymore
I don’t wanna live in a home at war
We can’t keep going on like this
Ignoring all the love we’ve missed
I wanna move forward but I don’t know how
I’m determined to...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-19-2012, 02:27 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
New Song
I'm prepared to go to war
In a fight for the ones I love
I've seen those bruises twice before
And now I'm pissed off
I'm seeing red, like the blood I saw
Running down her face, she crawled ...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2012, 12:49 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2012, 02:09 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
mother mother
A once beautiful woman
With such an ugly soul
I used to be your biggest fan
Now my hearts in turmoil
In my dreams, you haunt me
With a cold beer in hand
And now your face is all that taunts...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2012, 01:45 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 3,552
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2012, 01:42 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,980
a few tips
songs are composed of verses and choruses, optionally with bridges and refrains as well. the rhyme scheme is up to you, you can get as creative as you like with it, but it should contain some sort of...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2012, 01:26 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
Flyin' High
Today time keeps on dragging
I know I need to escape
Get away from all this nagging
Complaining, problems I can’t shake
I just wanna run away
Chorus:
Don’t you know that feeling when
You’re...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-17-2012, 04:36 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,455
Fairly new to songwriting
I have been writing since forever, but I have never actually put my words to music until last year, when i took a lyric writing class and and now when i write i hear the music in my head, so I have...
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