Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-16-2012, 08:31 PM
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You have some really interesting lines, and I...
You have some really interesting lines, and I like how you make them flow.
this part is so wonderful....
it seems our time is over now
it tears my soul to pieces how
we were never alone on...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-11-2012, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 3,029
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-11-2012, 02:45 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 549
Ok....
IMO...you have a great free flowing...
Ok....
IMO...you have a great free flowing heady poem. So if I were you...I would pull out some of the lines that you love and go with a feeling you are writing about...are sad,happy, frustrated,...
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