Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-12-2015, 02:15 AM
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Stained
This is a first draft, so any and all feedback is welcome! Thanks for reading!
This skin.
A shell and empty void
It's all that's left, and all I feel
Emotionally destroyed
This carcass....
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-12-2015, 02:10 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 511
Deafening
Thanks for checking out my post. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Just for clarification, everything in parentheses would be background vocals. Enjoy!
(Shhhhh...)
...It seems like...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-12-2015, 02:05 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 480
Cognition
A chemical reaction,
a process of evolution.
Its always been a problem,
never a solution.
We hunt, bleed and kill for it,
the myth that it can be true,
the folly that is our white...
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