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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-16-2015, 02:26 AM
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Posted By AssButt
Thanks man, I tried to keep mindful of the rhythm...

Thanks man, I tried to keep mindful of the rhythm but it may not come out the same way on the page as it does in my head; the second and third verses particularly.

Here is another one which is...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-11-2015, 01:26 AM
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Posted By AssButt
Poem/song?

Not sure of a title or anything, could be a sea shanty? All critique welcome.


In an attic o'er the sea
Mirrored by your leaky smile
I stammer back in pidgin Morse
Inadequacies vile

Oh, tug...
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