Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-13-2009, 07:43 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-08-2009, 05:22 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,057
Thinking
Girl you've got me thinking
but mostly got me drinking
and i haven't been this thirsty in a week
I named my whiskey Selby
and ill call you Aileen
i wish you both would let me rest in peace
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-05-2008, 12:38 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 927
Sparks, Burning ****, Fire, and Flames
I met a girl
In this dream i had
She said "Don't wake up!"
And now I feel bad
Like that time at the park
When I smoked all the trees
But I never got high
And now there's no air to breathe
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-03-2008, 12:28 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 874
thanks for the comments, they were pretty...
thanks for the comments, they were pretty thoughtful.
I guess i chose the word preaching because preachers usually spit out a lot of bull**** without really thinking about what they're actually...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-31-2008, 11:16 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 874
****in texts
i dont know how it makes me feel when you call and tell me that maybe the next time im in fresno you'll take the time to see me and when i say hopefully you dont respond to me you wait there silently...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-20-2008, 03:19 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,285
ya thats kind of the idea. i wanted to make it...
ya thats kind of the idea. i wanted to make it ambiguous so that whoever tried to interpret it would get their own image of what they thought was orange and brown.
The image or feeling i get when...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-19-2008, 09:55 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,085
A Wonderful Day
Such a wonderful day
As we all play croquet
And my mom is here smiling
With a glass of champagne
and my dad with a beer
and we're all close and near
and we laugh and we play
and my brother he...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-19-2008, 06:07 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,285
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-15-2008, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,285
orange and brown
I watched as it came out
it was all orange and brown
And I can see
a little piece of me
on the ground
I watched as it came out
it was all orange and brown
you'd never guess
if you tried your...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-12-2008, 09:36 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,711
i hate soup
Take a course in discourse
and of course intercourse
state sanctioned aestheticism
and similar forms of racism
sand ******s and towelheads
love a trigger and nuke warheads
now to define...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-10-2008, 09:48 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,048
I Want to Waste
I dont really care if you dont reply, but hopefully you read through it. thanks.
I want to waste tonight.
I want to waste outright.
I want to take my time,
and erase that curving line.
I...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-04-2008, 11:27 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,726
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-04-2008, 07:52 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,726
new version:
I know you dont understand ...
new version:
I know you dont understand
And I wonder even if I can
If you would only let me stay in hell
Its always been hard for me
When hanging out fails to please
And your love just...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-03-2008, 05:50 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,726
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-01-2008, 10:36 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,679
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-26-2008, 02:24 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,290
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-14-2008, 06:45 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,290
Expensive Lessons
The music behind this can be heard (without lyrics, as we're just getting into dabbling with vocals) here: MySpace.com - Sunny Bonos - Isla Vista, California - Garage / Garage / Garage -...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-11-2008, 04:30 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,319
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-11-2008, 11:20 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,102
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-10-2008, 10:37 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,102
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-10-2008, 12:43 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,102
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-08-2008, 01:58 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,102
mosquitos
Im a mosquito
I'll suck your ****
Puke up a fetus
And short its stock
Its the new world plan
Generation of piss
By ingesting a man's
load of penis drips
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-06-2008, 05:38 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 3,045
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-05-2008, 04:02 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,303
Expensive
i might add a third stanza. i dont know though. Think of this as a neil young type of song, especially "Dont let it bring you down"
YouTube - Neil Young "Don't let It Bring you Down"...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-03-2008, 02:24 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,388
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