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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-22-2006, 12:02 AM
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Posted By Ace
Don't mention it, and nice work.

Don't mention it, and nice work.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-21-2006, 11:53 PM
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Views: 2,112
Posted By Ace
Don’t what I m doin, or has been done, make that...

Don’t what I m doin, or has been done, make that what has been done.
And add the word know back there^. I think you just left that out by accident.
I hate the weight I’ve to carry, you can leave...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-21-2006, 11:40 PM
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Views: 2,112
Posted By Ace
Not all the I's. Just the ones like "where the...

Not all the I's. Just the ones like "where the hell I been", and "thinking of all I seen", to I've. But it's still good, nonetheless.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-21-2006, 09:41 PM
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Views: 2,112
Posted By Ace
For some reason I find myself being reminded of...

For some reason I find myself being reminded of Stone Sour's Omega.
Change the I's to I've's. Other than that, I really like it.
Good work.
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