Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-22-2005, 01:15 PM
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Replies: 8
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You repeat the line
"Don't pass me by, ...
You repeat the line
"Don't pass me by,
Don't pass me by,
Don't let me go..."
far too much. It loses its power.
Also, the rhyming seems trite. Don't stop writing by any means, but put...
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