Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-10-2006, 10:53 PM
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Replies: 15
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"ripped my heart." = way too cliche, same with...
"ripped my heart." = way too cliche, same with heart in your hands. Try some different metaphors, stay away from like, all those killing, breaking, tearing, cutting, black heart kind of metaphors you...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-10-2006, 10:33 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,499
1. You're not one to talk about dodging...
1. You're not one to talk about dodging questions.
2. I don't know any girl that would want any of those in her relationship.
3. You made it sound like you were talking about her to urban.
4. Your...
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