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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-17-2014, 12:18 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
He walked directly upstairs when reaching home,...

He walked directly upstairs when reaching home, no time or thought for tea or such. When he reached the bed, he bled tears into his pillow, sobs absorbed by the cushion. He heard his father approach...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-17-2014, 12:18 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
I want to get as many opinions on this as I can...

I want to get as many opinions on this as I can as I want to try and redraft it to the best of my abilities pretty soon for a submission so holla:

Isaac had a moment of lucidity just before...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-23-2014, 10:37 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Written about the time I went to see but didn't...

Written about the time I went to see but didn't really see Odd Future:

​The worn Chicago streets sizzled dryly in the smoggy haze thrown down by the sun. Feet wandered up walkways silently...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-20-2012, 11:52 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
I tried to write this like I've theorized Neil...

I tried to write this like I've theorized Neil Young songs are written.

On the Beach

The storm clouds were rolling in, just as the waves were only feet ahead of them. It was mesmerizing, how...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-27-2012, 07:09 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
I should lengthen it. When I originally wrote it...

I should lengthen it. When I originally wrote it I knew it would be better longer, but I was writing it for a scholarship competition that allowed 1000 words max, and I hit 998, give or take one or...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-26-2012, 08:19 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Young basedgod and i'm posted up on tha cross ...

Young basedgod and i'm posted up on tha cross
Young Sweet T stay fly like Albatross
Young Sweet T speak like dentists, maaaan watch me floss
Old Sweet T, twist the game, now impressions false
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-17-2012, 10:02 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Here's the untitled rap, first in a while: ...

Here's the untitled rap, first in a while:

Triple X let's get nasty
321 let's have a blast
Android predators have a flash drive
Hesitate to meditate like Jack off
30 Rock - counter puncture a...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-17-2012, 06:51 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Video I made, rap coming soon. I1bhMXApfLA

Video I made, rap coming soon.

I1bhMXApfLA
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-06-2012, 04:53 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Tell me if you find a major plothole because i...

Tell me if you find a major plothole because i think i did.

Trinity

The tone was somber in the final song the band played for their reputable audience. The drummer skittishly changed time...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-25-2012, 06:11 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Untitled I went on a journey I put on...

Untitled

I went on a journey

I put on my war paint
And I packed my life
And I followed a path.

I met with the Black Bird
His eyes so void
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2012, 07:05 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,775
Posted By Surell
Surell's Writing Postup

I want to start with a short story i wrote for a scholarship, called "To Ashes." FEED ME BACK.

Lightning crashed, and the tree it struck exuded spark from its top; only the rain kept it from...
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