Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-10-2009, 08:16 AM
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Huh. Its great, but a few lines seem out of...
Huh. Its great, but a few lines seem out of place. "Now watch me spin circles round you dear" doesn't really go with the rest of the song...And you could replace "But you, you could sing them all"...
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