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04-19-2009, 07:20 PM
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04-19-2009, 06:57 PM
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04-19-2009, 06:47 PM
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hmm. and why? condense your stanzas just a tad....
hmm. and why? condense your stanzas just a tad. and maybe add a bit more life into the action going on. . .theres a billion poems that compare running to struggles. . .do something to make it unique.
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03-13-2009, 02:46 PM
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03-12-2009, 02:37 PM
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02-23-2009, 06:45 PM
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02-23-2009, 06:41 PM
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02-23-2009, 06:35 PM
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02-23-2009, 06:25 PM
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02-22-2009, 01:49 PM
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02-21-2009, 08:18 PM
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02-21-2009, 11:27 AM
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yeah its an extended metaphor. the demon is the...
yeah its an extended metaphor. the demon is the corrupter of the others' mind [the converter, not the original poet]. the mask is the person who lets no one in, who shows no emotion to the outside...
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02-21-2009, 11:15 AM
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02-20-2009, 02:13 PM
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wtf? thats not nice! we are all havin a...
wtf? thats not nice! we are all havin a CONVERSATION here that directly links to the piece of writing as we are philosophizing [or, not, some of us know what were talking about] about what this...
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Forum: Thread Graveyard
02-20-2009, 01:49 PM
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02-20-2009, 12:01 PM
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02-19-2009, 12:02 PM
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02-18-2009, 02:59 PM
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