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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-14-2009, 11:39 PM
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Posted By Naked
I like it as a pop song, kind of like beach boys...

I like it as a pop song, kind of like beach boys western pop or fleet foxes.

Yah, it does. What's the meaning?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-28-2009, 08:41 AM
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Posted By Naked
It is amateur writing, but when I look back at...

It is amateur writing, but when I look back at where I started I'm appalled.
My real advice is to study what you've wrote here, and improve on it. Repetition can be good, but how can you make it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-27-2009, 11:10 PM
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Posted By Naked
Take out the last line, and it's good.

Take out the last line, and it's good.
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