Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-20-2010, 02:15 PM
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Hi khfreek,
I put some comments in bold in...
Hi khfreek,
I put some comments in bold in your partial lyrics below. Overall, I like that it is a story (because I like story songs). The rhyming choices often seem very simple, perhaps too...
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