Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-09-2010, 02:09 AM
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A Friend
The hours of the days,
Of the...
A Friend
The hours of the days,
Of the life I sacrificed
Swept up in an instant,
To be spoken to of,
The realization of difference
I had the willingness to dream
Was there even a threat?
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-27-2009, 01:25 PM
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Replies: 63
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Great advice dude, thanks a bunch. I guess I...
Great advice dude, thanks a bunch. I guess I kinda need to realize that I don't need to be pumping out songs constantly, I should let them have their own natural flow, right? Yeah, like you, I...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-27-2009, 10:37 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-25-2009, 11:26 PM
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Replies: 63
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Hey guys, dug this one up today. Not sure what...
Hey guys, dug this one up today. Not sure what you'll think about it, cause I'm not quite sure either. Anyways, hope you like, I really wish I had time to write new ones. School + no free time =...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-21-2009, 06:27 AM
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Replies: 63
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Thanks AwwSugar! I'm not sure about either of...
Thanks AwwSugar! I'm not sure about either of them, to be honest, cause they were kinda rushed so that you guys didn't forget about me :P But, like you, I'm leaning more towards beached rather than...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-20-2009, 08:46 PM
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Replies: 63
Views: 5,547
Hey guys, I'm finally back with two new ones. ...
Hey guys, I'm finally back with two new ones. Sorry they've taken so long, but I'm sorry to say that I think songs'll be coming at a slower rate now that I have school :\ Kinda makes me wish I had...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-09-2009, 11:22 AM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-09-2009, 08:56 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-08-2009, 02:12 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-07-2009, 11:52 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-07-2009, 10:57 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-07-2009, 10:39 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-06-2009, 10:35 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-06-2009, 10:30 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-29-2009, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-28-2009, 10:44 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-27-2009, 02:00 PM
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Replies: 63
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" Untitled 2 "
Daddy and mommy feel the same...
" Untitled 2 "
Daddy and mommy feel the same way
Think you can twist me like molding clay
Won't forget that sisters here
Won't let me live,
Just be like her, dear
Just act like her, dear...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-21-2009, 06:54 AM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-20-2009, 02:40 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-18-2009, 02:24 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-17-2009, 11:12 PM
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Replies: 63
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" The Vat "
One in nine o' nine
Relocate...
" The Vat "
One in nine o' nine
Relocate through the currents
Can you sleep through white nights?
Into the jungle, man
Hide from the turrets
When the hands of the father
Come down on our...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-13-2009, 07:16 PM
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Replies: 63
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-12-2009, 07:50 AM
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Replies: 63
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"Now that I've considered the subject matter,...
"Now that I've considered the subject matter, I'll move on to the structure.
I see you use a lot of assonance, the rhyming of vowel sounds within words. I've underlined them in your song above....
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-07-2009, 07:45 PM
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Replies: 63
Views: 5,547
Hey Erica, thanks for the reply :) Well, you...
Hey Erica, thanks for the reply :) Well, you basically hit a bullseye there, good job on figuring out the meaning! It's such a horrible topic though, it's so sad. The nectar represents the drugs...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-30-2009, 04:04 PM
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Replies: 63
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