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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-24-2010, 09:46 PM
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Posted By thomasracer56
I like it. It has many metaphors (MANY), but it...

I like it. It has many metaphors (MANY), but it still makes a clear point. I know if I packed with that much, I'd screw up.
I don't really see something to improve/ something wrong, good work.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-06-2010, 02:28 AM
Replies: 68
Views: 11,885
Posted By thomasracer56
You still are doing good, reminds me that once I...

You still are doing good, reminds me that once I get besides a PSP, I need to start a journal... for now, I'm still limited to reading. Gives me some tips in addition to the thread titled for that.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-13-2010, 06:21 PM
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Views: 11,885
Posted By thomasracer56
No problem!

No problem!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-12-2010, 10:12 PM
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Views: 11,885
Posted By thomasracer56
your first i felt was a bit repetitive and...

your first i felt was a bit repetitive and confusing with the phrasing, but your second made a little more sense. I like your second song, it was clear and easy to read, without the use of...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-12-2010, 08:06 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 11,885
Posted By thomasracer56
Yoosa be good, you should continue, I'll be...

Yoosa be good, you should continue, I'll be looking with interest.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-10-2010, 09:06 AM
Replies: 68
Views: 11,885
Posted By thomasracer56
That's a successful attempt(it's happy alright)!...

That's a successful attempt(it's happy alright)! Likin' your lyrics!
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