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Forum: The Lounge 10-23-2018, 02:49 PM
Replies: 744
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Posted By Frownland
I was already...ja you can get a dedication if...

I was already...ja you can get a dedication if you buy me some weed. If it's mids, don't bother.
Forum: The Lounge 10-23-2018, 02:45 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
^Gucci. I've added about 3 pages to The...

^Gucci.

I've added about 3 pages to The Hourglass (https://www.musicbanter.com/lounge/89660-horror-writing-competition-round-2-voting.html#post1852662) and I'm aiming to expand it into a book...
Forum: The Lounge 05-11-2018, 05:35 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
I would never say that something's not something...

I would never say that something's not something that it's obviously thinging.
Forum: The Lounge 05-09-2018, 04:16 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Just close it with a nifty "and that's why you...

Just close it with a nifty "and that's why you always leave a note."
Forum: The Lounge 03-28-2018, 11:16 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Terms of Use

Terms of Use
Forum: The Lounge 03-16-2018, 04:34 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
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Forum: The Lounge 03-12-2018, 03:54 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Even when being ironic you manage to be redundant...

Even when being ironic you manage to be redundant smh
Forum: The Lounge 02-23-2018, 06:40 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Exactly my approach and difficulty with writing a...

Exactly my approach and difficulty with writing a novel. When I write, most lines take at least ten minutes each during the rough draft process alone because I want it to sound good, have meaning(s),...
Forum: The Lounge 01-30-2018, 06:43 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
A Brief History of Another Reality Stephen...

A Brief History of Another Reality

Stephen Hawking is just a regular old scientist with no disease or anything and everyone realizes how mediocre he is.
Forum: The Lounge 01-29-2018, 10:37 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
An Earnest Calculation 500 B0OBS

An Earnest Calculation

500 B0OBS
Forum: The Lounge 01-29-2018, 11:08 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Embers The rest of the world fell away from...

Embers

The rest of the world fell away from the room as everyone awaited for the doctor to announce his decision.

"Midgets with huge tits and fat asses," he declared. Everybody breathed a sigh...
Forum: The Lounge 01-29-2018, 10:19 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Eagle's Feather Breaking Bound Branches ...

Eagle's Feather Breaking Bound Branches

There once was a story that didn't start off with "there once was...". Everybody figured that it happened twice.
Forum: The Lounge 01-24-2018, 05:24 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
@Mondo It's the strongest writing that I've...

@Mondo

It's the strongest writing that I've seen from you to date. Your imagery especially is vivid and doesn't feel arbitrarily slapped on. Your increased reading is showing I think.
Forum: The Lounge 01-11-2018, 04:54 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Or Orphello?

Or Orphello?
Forum: The Lounge 01-11-2018, 03:14 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
I've decided that my 9/11 stoner comedy is better...

I've decided that my 9/11 stoner comedy is better geared for a screenplay than a short story.
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 03:35 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
I liked how you used paragraphs. Lot of...

I liked how you used paragraphs.

Lot of exposition there, I would recommend trying to show more than you tell (https://thewritepractice.com/show-dont-tell/). A lot of your details seem to be there...
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 03:09 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
I really liked your imagery and style, but the...

I really liked your imagery and style, but the concept was kind of lost on me. It was translated, right? Is there a big difference between the original and the English version in your eyes?
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 03:08 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
There's your pat, now embrace why you suck!

There's your pat, now embrace why you suck!
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 02:57 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Nah, you need to try to be less sensitive to...

Nah, you need to try to be less sensitive to criticism. TH wasn't even harsh with his comments and viewing them as such just tells me that you want a pat on the back instead of honest thoughts on...
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 02:14 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
You could say the same for any satire: something...

You could say the same for any satire: something funny is going to happen. That doesn't mean that the way that the comedy or horror comes about can't be unpredictable. EAP's stories are surprising to...
Forum: The Lounge 12-22-2017, 01:58 PM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Are you only capable of avoiding predictability...

Are you only capable of avoiding predictability when you write on darker themes or something?
Forum: The Lounge 12-21-2017, 09:06 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
The sustained periods of silence are difficult to...

The sustained periods of silence are difficult to pull off when they do that. Sucks.
Forum: The Lounge 12-21-2017, 09:01 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
One little slip at a tar pit is all it takes to...

One little slip at a tar pit is all it takes to get your ass kicked.
Forum: The Lounge 12-21-2017, 08:56 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Be careful, blackface is generally frowned upon...

Be careful, blackface is generally frowned upon in modern times.
Forum: The Lounge 11-11-2017, 10:06 AM
Replies: 744
Views: 32,481
Posted By Frownland
Nah it should be is or else we would apply this...

Nah it should be is or else we would apply this to countries as well.
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