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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

07-12-2005, 07:32 AM

Replies: 8

Diamond dressed.

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Posted By _The_Repeats_

Okay. Does this work any better? He took the...

Okay. Does this work any better?

He took the rose,
That she had kissed,
But it wasn't her,
That he had missed.
She was beauty,
She had love and light,
But he'd had enough,
And left that...

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

07-12-2005, 07:20 AM

Replies: 8

Diamond dressed.

Views: 1,653

Posted By _The_Repeats_

Thanks. Aha, uhm yeah, I thought the "She had...

Thanks. Aha, uhm yeah, I thought the "She had love and light," bit sounded a little odd. Any suggestions? Change it, take it out?

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

07-12-2005, 07:14 AM

Replies: 8

Diamond dressed.

Views: 1,653

Posted By _The_Repeats_

Diamond dressed.

I know I always post lyrics, but I never really know which ones to use... Tell me if these are any good?

Brushing the diamonds from her dress,
She doesn't need them anymore,
She blew him a...

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