Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-09-2006, 09:35 AM
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Replies: 9
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Should I include this part too?
I'm hungry...
Should I include this part too?
I'm hungry for your touch
I can't wait another minute
We know what's going down
My tongue upon your flesh
Upon your mouth, I want to be in it
Want to feel...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-08-2006, 04:09 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,434
Cheers, remember to check the edits!
EDIT: ...
Cheers, remember to check the edits!
EDIT: I was doing a little Wiki searching on food-fetishes and cannibalism, to get ideas (for the song, right!) and I found this. EXTREMELY INTERESTING.
A...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-08-2006, 03:28 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,434
I think it'll be fine if it comes across as all...
I think it'll be fine if it comes across as all being comedic, because then the audience should be simultaneously tickled by the thought of eating food off another person and the thought of eating...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-08-2006, 03:18 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,434
I want it to be semi-comedic, so not a...
I want it to be semi-comedic, so not a nose-honking, nudge-in-the-ribs kind of comedy, but more a kind of fun lyric, but with a slightly disturbing tinge.
I'm not even sure if its possible, but...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-08-2006, 05:17 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,434
Not quite about sploshing.
I've started writing a lyric stemming from this idea. The music I have (already done the chords, rhythm and melody or guitar) is fast but fluid and the tune is good, so I'm not going to write about...
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