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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-03-2006, 09:16 AM
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Posted By Crazy Luv
the link ya gave me...ring a bell?

the link ya gave me...ring a bell?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-03-2006, 09:06 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
^i was gonna say, ya dont look like not ****ing...

^i was gonna say, ya dont look like not ****ing 32 year old
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-02-2006, 09:01 AM
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Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
i like some parts confused me a lil', but...

i like


some parts confused me a lil', but i still like it.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-01-2006, 01:17 PM
Replies: 72
Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
post your other poems...if you wanna, we'll help...

post your other poems...if you wanna, we'll help ya
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-01-2006, 11:09 AM
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Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
i like it! fits perfectly.

i like it! fits perfectly.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-01-2006, 10:53 AM
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Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
okay, keep the last three lines if they mean that...

okay, keep the last three lines if they mean that much :). For the i think you're so ugly its unbelievable, it doesnt really go with the line before it, i think you should rephase it or something.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-01-2006, 10:22 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
the bolded parts are the parts i think that needs...

the bolded parts are the parts i think that needs to be looked at. some parts need to be changed, some need to be shorten'd, & some dont need to be there at all or changed completely. Other than that...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-01-2006, 09:45 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 7,328
Posted By Crazy Luv
that part confused me. i like it, yea,...

that part confused me.


i like it, yea, shows lots of emotion. the chorus or course, whatever, needs some work though.
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