Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-26-2015, 08:05 AM
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Replies: 4
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Thanks for the critisism on this, and Ivery...
Thanks for the critisism on this, and Ivery already made some tweaks to the song. Also would you mind specifically telling some areas I need to change and see if still need to change anything in it?
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-11-2015, 12:23 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,340
I like when wind blows.... EMPTY HOUSE
I like when wind blows softly
Through my veins, my cold icy veins
And when I walked into the basement
With the blood splattered on the wall
Can I, please be warm?
Can I make myself up to feel...
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