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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-23-2009, 04:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
Dude, its 16 bars per verse? I don't understand...

Dude, its 16 bars per verse? I don't understand your point; please elaborate.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-19-2009, 11:01 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
How would you do it then, in all seriousness?

How would you do it then, in all seriousness?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-13-2009, 08:38 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
haha if you want to hear a semigood recording of...

haha if you want to hear a semigood recording of it by me then go to
Two Step Tags on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads (http://www.myspace.com/twosteptags)
we're...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-12-2009, 02:34 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
thanks mate haha that was a while ago

thanks mate haha that was a while ago
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-21-2009, 07:31 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
Thanks dude thats really helpful! Yeah I'm...

Thanks dude thats really helpful!
Yeah I'm scrapping this one anyway, but yesterday my friend and I made a satire for the rapcore scene music, and he put it on our soundclick.

its here:...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2009, 04:20 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
This is my first song. But it isn't a rock...

This is my first song.
But it isn't a rock song, the verses will be rapped and I am still debating on
whether or not the chorus should be rapped,or sung, or screamed, or what.
Anyway, thanks for...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2009, 03:59 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
Any suggestions, mate?

Any suggestions, mate?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-09-2009, 05:36 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,285
Posted By Lutherfish
ditto

ditto
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-07-2009, 05:30 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,285
Posted By Lutherfish
Well, how about that. Do perhaps have the audio...

Well, how about that.
Do perhaps have the audio somewhere on the web?
I would like to hear it, because otherwise it's hard to tell the beat
to which it is rapped at.
And is the "chorus" sung or...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-07-2009, 05:24 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
If I were to redo it, then what would you suggest...

If I were to redo it, then what would you suggest I change?
Perhaps to make it more original and unique; or is it at the point of no return
and there is no way to recover this one?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2009, 07:52 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
Really, any feedback or comments would be very...

Really, any feedback or comments would be very helpful.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2009, 07:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,872
Posted By Lutherfish
Not sure I know what you mean, but that's getting...

Not sure I know what you mean, but that's getting kind of off topic, so...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2009, 07:26 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,235
Posted By Lutherfish
Sounds pretty good.

Sounds pretty good.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2009, 07:22 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,872
Posted By Lutherfish
I could also see that. But I don't know about...

I could also see that.
But I don't know about the "best lyrics" bit.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 07:39 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,218
Posted By Lutherfish
I like it. But I think that for it to be a song,...

I like it. But I think that for it to be a song, you should maybe put more words in there for syllabic consistancy.
It just kind of drops near the end.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 07:34 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 6,493
Posted By Lutherfish
I suppose I'd have to hear it for valid feedback....

I suppose I'd have to hear it for valid feedback.
With rap, the metre is hard to figure.
But it's definitely very...rap.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 07:24 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,285
Posted By Lutherfish
Dude I dig it! It has great potential I think! ...

Dude I dig it! It has great potential I think!
The whole "You're My Little Angel" bit is a bit obnoxious, I'm not going to lie.
And I must agree that the line
"Went on the floor! blood on your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 07:16 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,235
Posted By Lutherfish
Yeah, I agree. If it goes with the music, well...

Yeah, I agree. If it goes with the music, well you got yourself a song.
And growling it would work well with that idea.
Does your band perhaps have a MySpace or Soundclick?
I'd like to hear the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 07:10 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,872
Posted By Lutherfish
I think that the song is supposed to be for a...

I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song.
Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria.
If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-02-2009, 03:42 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,744
Posted By Lutherfish
Help with these lyrics would be much appreciated

This seems to be a common thing but whatever.
I've always loved poetry and music, and after my girlfriend left me about a month ago,
well this weekend I listened to like 10 hours of Hollywood...
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