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Basket Case 10-14-2005 12:03 PM

rate my lyrics
 
Dream of United Kingdom

Dream of United Kingdom
The place dreams that are crushed
Mind are turned to ****ing slush
Dream of United Kingdom

Dream of United Kingdom
Where hell is born to create chaos
The chaos, which will kill us all
Dream of United Kingdom

Dream of United Kingdom
People sleep all the freaking time
There’s never any good wine
Dream of United Kingdom

Dream of United Kingdom
The place I hate so damn much
Full of retarded rules and such
Dream of United Kingdom


ok then rate my lyrics, my sis liked them. er i sorta based this on my experience.
k laters, peace.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe 10-14-2005 12:10 PM

its....ok, i guess. its quite repetative though.....

and its in the wrong forum.

we have another forum.....for stuff like this......its called.......SONG WRITING.

use it :)

Thricek08 11-08-2005 10:13 AM

i give it a 1

Kashmir86 11-08-2005 11:19 AM

i give it a generous .5
although nowadays i wouldnt doubt that that song would make it to the top
it kinda sounds like somethin that you would hear out of linkin park or some ****ty band like that

Edward 11-11-2005 03:59 AM

what's so bad about the UK?

bungalow 11-11-2005 04:00 PM

wow.........

ladyluckrules 11-11-2005 05:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Edward
what's so bad about the UK?

I'm sorry to inform you that the person at hand is flailing to attempt the lyrics of an 'An@rch1 PuNx' song.

They do not have the threshold to be witty and therefore resort to calling the place retarded whilst throwing in a reference to booze and a swearword.
The cretin feels it's job is done and then proceeds to ask their sister if it resembles loosely something the Sex Pistols would write. The sister, shaken by hearing 'the tru wrd of pun7k' unknowingly encourages the true idiocy of the eager green day fan, aspiring to fill billy joe's eyeliner-laden eyes with adoration.

Et Viola.

demon hunter 11-11-2005 09:00 PM

i give them a 5 maybe a 6. not that bad.

Hellhound-138 11-11-2005 09:05 PM

I agree with ladyluckrules and I give this crap a 0 out of 1 million. Your **** the UK song is really uninspired, leave the UK bashing to Conflict.

madeinNY 11-12-2005 08:33 AM

I give it a 2....it doesn't quite make much sense, and it's overly repetitive....I don't particularly like it.

But hey, just MO.


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