S.B.

A problem for these figgas Drama cuz I'm that nigga/
A bomber on the trigger,this rhymer no one slicker/
A rapper of new game now I rap to a new frame/
Strapped with a true slang adapt to a new change/
Spit rap till dA roof rain get crack to ya crew stain/
woo who do you blame I'm true to my poot stains/
Troop to the booth main the truth with a loose brain/
Choose to be cool lame or Cruise with a bruise frame/
move a crew of Stain-less prove to you dudes who brainless/
removein niggas vaineses provein you dudes is nameless/
I'm a spit like i taste sh*t better yet like I was savin it/
you namein it I did it done it run it and refraim from it/
as for the game I'm savin it let up sh*t I'm claimin it/....
Came in this thang a gang a hits f*ckin up ya name change & this/
the most honest modest hottest with out nonsense/
profound spit pullin niggas from heaven make'em grounded/


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Hype8

nice rhyme scheme.. flowed good as well. Keep it up eh.

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Electric Eye

good job but you over used "******", i know it may make you feel bad ass, i know what trying to be bad ass is because i am a badass poser, but really it doesn't make you bad ass although you may think it does, I think listinig to metal makes me badass but thats just because i'm a poser.

Scarlett O'Hara

I never did have the ability to read or understand rap.

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Fenixpunk

i cant really rap so ill make up new slang,
but half my shit dont make sense,
so ill bold the whole thang,
and when kids read it theyll think this guys tough,
cuz i use words like ******, and trigger but it isnt enough,
ill rap about how i can beat your whole crew,
and talk about poot stains like i was only 2,
did i read that right?
you spit like you taste shit? well that would explain the stink.
veinses isnt a word, moron, next time stop and think.
so go huff and puff, but i just brought your thread down,
made some jokes about your flows, but youre not dealing with a clown,
i dont claim to be nothing, and dont spit to feel big.
but i enjoy teaching lessons to those who pretend,
so come back if you must.
attack if you must.
spend a week perfecting a flow so youre not so weak if you must.
but remember ill disect you and dish out more junk,
i dont claim to be a rapper, but you just got owned by a punk.

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Merkaba

GET THIS MAN A BEER!

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Scarlett O'Hara

Best.flamage.ever.

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DontRunMeOver

That was brilliant Fenix.

I'm a bit worried by this whole 'sh*t' issue. It seems that he doesn't just taste the sh*t, he's also been saving the stuff up (a bit like a squirrel with his nuts, only these are long, soggy nuts). He's got a whole store of sh*t somewhere festering, decaying, stinking his whole house out. And every so often he goes into that smelly storeroom and has a little taste of the sh*t, then starts spitting and maybe even cussing. I wouldn't want to live next to him. I certainly feel for his family.

bungalow

that was.....brilliant, I think SB will be to ashamed to return to this forum...as well he should be

jibber

here's a thought, say badass ONE more time, i think you might have the world record then. talk about overusing a word...

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