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RealXenWarrior 12-02-2005 08:09 AM

With Ailments Like These: "Hell"
 
Beauty my devil.
Impatience, temptation...
The sweetest thing that ever walked God's creation.
Touching where i shouldn't...
Held back but I couldn't...
Never thought me in a much better situation.

Salvation is found,
In a place not so sound,
In a cell with no bars,
the cars just keep on passing by.

In my room on my bed...
the golden sunlight it spreads.
the darkened shadows like threads of dread,
And guilt I hold inside...

He stumbles with uncertainty...
His cane it clicks the stick that hinders his walking by.
You may pick a blind man's pocket...
But can you take the hell that you hold inside?

Dress me up (dress me up)
Let me out (let me out)
To the world I'm...
What they all talk about...

Salvation is found,
In a place not so sound,
In a cell with no bars,
the cars just keep on passing by.

In my room on my bed...
the golden sunlight it spreads.
the darkened shadows like threads of dread,
And guilt I hold inside...

So who's gonna pick you up,
When everybody you down?
Who's gonna pick you up,
When every body left you DOWN?

they all left you down...

sweetness 12-13-2005 12:56 PM

How Do You Post Songs You Write Cause I Wrote A Song Adn It's Pretty Cool. You May Like It.

RealXenWarrior 01-05-2006 06:50 AM

just post a thread and write the lyrics in it.
post it bro
id like to read it :)

Crazy Luv 01-05-2006 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RealXenWarrior
Beauty my devil.
Impatience, temptation...
The sweetest thing that ever walked God's creation.
Touching where i shouldn't...
Held back but I couldn't...
Never thought me in a much better situation.

Salvation is found,
In a place not so sound,
In a cell with no bars,
the cars just keep on passing by.

In my room on my bed...
the golden sunlight it spreads.
the darkened shadows like threads of dread,
And guilt I hold inside...

He stumbles with uncertainty...
His cane it clicks the stick that hinders his walking by.
You may pick a blind man's pocket...
But can you take the hell that you hold inside?

i like it to this part...& maybe even...
Quote:

Dress me up (dress me up)
Let me out (let me out)
To the world I'm...
What they all talk about...
this part. but not to go with this song or poem




didnt get this part...
Quote:

Originally Posted by RealXenWarrior
So who's gonna pick you up,
When everybody you down?
Who's gonna pick you up,
When everybody left you DOWN?



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