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bungalow

12-10-2005 08:56 PM

What can I say....
we think so similarly

Laces Out Dan!

12-10-2005 08:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bungalowbill357

I woke up the other day and cried
I was sad because because my girlfriend died
So I cut my wrists through the vein
My life is so hard that I cant feel pain

xxI slit my wrists for you xx
xx I sat and Cried for you xx
xxI died my hair black to be cool xx
xxI wish i could see you xx

My life is an abyss of pain
Falling through a spiral of razorblade game
Someone murder me cause I dont wanna wake up again
Bye bye my life love lost
For you I pay the bloody cost

xxI cut my wrists for you xx
xx I took my life for you xx
xx My broken tears are silent on your back xx
I would fuck you If i was a necropheliac

BEAT THAT BITCH

:rofl: you Pwned his ass lol.......Ethan you did good too lol

sleepy jack

12-10-2005 08:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bungalowbill357

What can I say....
we think so similarly

Yes.
Your like my e-twin or something.

EDIT: learn to write REAL lyrics that are good not that whiny pop crap.

example:

Dear, just one day, just another fight
just one more lonely night
Just one more crowd under the burning lights
with some blood and mind to be paid
To my friends to my family
I tried to be the best man I could ever be
I tasted their failure on the entrance way
with some blood and mind to be paid
To my greatest of demons, I beat you
I beat you

and that is what we call kick ass

A_Perfect_Sonnet

12-11-2005 12:09 PM

My eyes bled the tears of a blackened heart,
A broken promise still hangs from my mirror.
The note reads "I love you. Signed Liar."
A burning question sets the words on fire.

Snap, you're all owned. My lyrics are scene to the max.

sleepy jack

12-11-2005 02:11 PM

That was so ..::x[.hxc.scenesta.cutyerwrists.]x::..

riseagainstrocks

12-11-2005 02:15 PM

would it be inappropriate to post the myspace suicide note here? they're almost as bad as x-ditorted-i'm-a-****ing-retard-x's lyrics

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe

12-11-2005 02:16 PM

i say go right ahead....haha..

riseagainstrocks

12-11-2005 02:21 PM

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5...ulletin7ki.gif

PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!!
and unbreak my heart, thats thrown against the wall!
cause you stood there and stabbed and ripped.
stab rip gun stab heart bullet stab blood dying rip massacre stabheartripgun
PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!
and unsay these lies, cause i love you! I'm SO SORRY!!!!11!!1LOVE!!!11!
GUNRIPSTABHEARTDANCEDANCERIPHEART

i am going straight to hell

sleepy jack

12-11-2005 02:22 PM

Oh.
My.
Fucking.
God.
I now worship thou.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe

12-11-2005 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by riseagainstrocks

worth it though wasnt it?

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