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Crazy Luv 12-29-2005 03:45 PM
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Originally Posted by this_guy
Oh crap my poem has know been caught with a teen trend because of its theme.

that didnt make any ****ing sense

this_guy 12-29-2005 03:55 PM
I just don't like the fact that you are emo and everything is emo if you write about death.

this_guy 12-29-2005 03:57 PM
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Originally Posted by Alexisonfire
Not the theme, the way you wrote it as i said their are alot of songs/poems on suicide that aren't cliche.

Like I said before I don't believe that is a good thing to say about peoples work as in the end everything will be cliche. What happens when everything is written about.

sleepy jack 12-29-2005 04:01 PM
Okay, sorry i thought when you posted this song you wanted to to be criticized guess i was wrong.

Crazy Luv 12-29-2005 04:02 PM
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Originally Posted by this_guy
I just don't like the fact that you are emo and everything is emo if you write about death.

Who are you talking to? & everything is not emo if you write about death.


Quote:
Originally Posted by this_guy
Like I said before I don't believe that is a good thing to say about peoples work as in the end everything will be cliche. What happens when everything is written about.
everything could be written about, but theres always different ways to put it.

this_guy 12-29-2005 04:05 PM
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Originally Posted by Alexisonfire
Okay, sorry i thought when you posted this song you wanted to to be criticized guess i was wrong.

It's not a song.


I know this is for criticizing but the fact that because I am aiming at what USUALLY happens it is being called a bad poem.

Crazy Luv 12-29-2005 04:08 PM
its bad cause its not written in the right way.

this_guy 12-29-2005 04:10 PM
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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
its bad cause its not written in the right way.

what exactly would be the right way

Crazy Luv 12-29-2005 04:17 PM
cut off the last stanza or just rewrite it. its going against what you're trying to say. its saying it was your fault, not theirs, which by what you told me, is not what you're trying to put out.

either/or 12-30-2005 01:17 AM
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Originally Posted by this_guy
as in the end everything will be cliche. What happens when everything is written about.
thats untrue. take a course in writing


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