Music Banter

Music Banter (https://www.musicbanter.com/)
-   Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry (https://www.musicbanter.com/song-writing-lyrics-poetry/)
-   -   Majestic Darkness (https://www.musicbanter.com/song-writing-lyrics-poetry/12847-majestic-darkness.html)

Ma Cherie 01-05-2006 12:22 PM

Majestic Darkness
 
Majestic Darkness

shallow looks
deep water eyes
saddness and myrth
they intertwine
like the roots
of a long dead vine

love and loss
the truth be told
all that is
was never gold

life and love
flutter so soft
becomes the wings
of a a pure white dove

such thoughts beguile
my sad hearts fancy
such things as these
make me antsy

the truth be known
in the dark nights hour
what then shall become
of all ones power

my heart stands still
and beats no more
it cries but a trill
in the midnights noir

to where lies the truth
in the word lenore
nameless again
forever more.

Ma Cherie 01-05-2006 02:28 PM

bump

Crazy Luv 01-05-2006 02:30 PM

go ahead with ya bad left! Very dark, but still good.

Ma Cherie 01-05-2006 02:36 PM

thanks tok awhile to write.... got so writers block for a bit.

sleepy jack 01-05-2006 03:01 PM

Congrats on sucking.

madeinNY 01-05-2006 05:17 PM

I liked it...but it did seem a bit idle....it's WAY depressing, but good if you like depressing... I give it 8 out of 10.


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 06:49 PM.


© 2003-2024 Advameg, Inc.