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madeinNY 01-05-2006 05:42 PM

All I Wanna Care About Is Me
 
A/N: Only helpful critism is accepted here, and no, "stop writing" is not helpful critism..I fear this song may be too cliche...tell me if I'm right and help me change that.
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All I Wanna Care About Is Me

Sitting here alone
The silence is pleasant
But the loneliness get's the best of me

If I tell myself I'm content
I just feel guilty
And if I tell myself I'm guilty
I can't be content

Someone parked in the fire exit.
And the trow trucks are off duty.

All I wanna care about is me
But you're a fire hazard
You lit me on fire
And now you're burned in my head
And my heart

Have you ever seen a human heart?
It looks like a fist wrapped in blood.
So did you punch my heart?
Is that why your stuck there?
You punched my heart to heard, didn't you?

All I wanna care about is me
But you're a fire hazard
You lit me on fire
And now you're burned in my head
And my heart

Someone parked in the fire exit.
And the tow trucks are off duty.

Have you ever seen a human heart?
It looks like a fist wrapped in blood.
So did you punch my heart?
Is that why your stuck there?
You punched my heart to heard, didn't you?

Someone parked in the fire exit.
And all the tow trucks are off duty.


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