Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral(rough draft) (ballad, quote, songs)

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 01-14-2006, 01:54 PM

Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral

Our velvet skin tears so easily

in these ultraviolet windshield wipers

I want you to read this a million times

the ballad of a boy noone cared about

between sunsets I invent new ways

for things to break

the things we believe in are

only distortions of our fragile

reality

Science fails us once again

take another sip of your cyanide martini

drive ten miles faster for me

maybe we can crash this car before

sundown

call the surgeon

we need an operation

sleepy jack · 01-14-2006, 01:55 PM

Very good for the rought draft, i like the ending quite a bit.

either/or · 01-14-2006, 09:04 PM

i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs.

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 01-15-2006, 10:34 AM

no you haven't

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 10:47 AM

Yeah it's good. I like it a lot, and like misfits I also think the ending is cool. Is this the old TheNumber12LooksLikeMe, or a new one?

Crazy Luv · 01-15-2006, 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheNumber12LooksLikeMe

no you haven't

how you gonna tell him he hasnt

creepinson · 01-15-2006, 05:22 PM

it looks familiar... and thats not good

right-track · 01-15-2006, 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by either/or

i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs.

I've heard all of those words in other songs before...just not in that order.

It's miserable...I like it.

creepinson · 01-15-2006, 06:02 PM

of course you have dumbass... HOLY SHIT WINDSHIELD WIPERS... WHO THE HELL CAME UP WITH THAT??!!?!?!!!111 its about the final product idiot

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 01-15-2006, 06:48 PM

I mean sure some of those words youve obviously heard
but my lines are original

and yes it is me hobojesus

01-14-2006, 01:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral(rough draft) Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral Our velvet skin tears so easily in these ultraviolet windshield wipers I want you to read this a million times the ballad of a boy noone cared about between sunsets I invent new ways for things to break the things we believe in are only distortions of our fragile reality Science fails us once again take another sip of your cyanide martini drive ten miles faster for me maybe we can crash this car before sundown call the surgeon we need an operation __________________ My heart is on strings and wires

01-14-2006, 09:04 PM	#3 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

01-15-2006, 10:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	no you haven't __________________ My heart is on strings and wires

01-15-2006, 06:48 PM	#10 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	I mean sure some of those words youve obviously heard but my lines are original and yes it is me hobojesus __________________ My heart is on strings and wires

01-15-2006, 10:47 AM	#5 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Yeah it's good. I like it a lot, and like misfits I also think the ending is cool. Is this the old TheNumber12LooksLikeMe, or a new one?

01-15-2006, 05:22 PM	#7 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	it looks familiar... and thats not good

01-15-2006, 06:02 PM	#9 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	of course you have dumbass... HOLY SHIT WINDSHIELD WIPERS... WHO THE HELL CAME UP WITH THAT??!!?!?!!!111 its about the final product idiot