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angel18 01-21-2006 01:15 PM

Help Me Please
 
I can’t help but wonder why I was brought here
I was among people I didn’t know, or like
Why I can’t help but be on my own,
It’s not like I’m afraid, it’s just I don’t know anyone,
I’d rather be back home, where I belong.
But I’m here the place I truly hate
The place where it happened all that time ago
A place I will never go to again
I don’t want to have to come back here.

Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am
Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am.

I feel so hopeless about the future
And what it will bring, depending on where it ends
I sit in a house where I know people love me
But they don’t seem to realise how I’m feeling
I wonder if I’ll ever move on in my mind
I feel stuck in a moment I can’t get out of
How much I’d like to go and see things I will never see
If I stay among the things that frighten me so much.

Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am
Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am.

Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 05:14 AM

^seriously, you got ****ing problems.


but anyways...
Quote:

Originally Posted by angel18
Can’t help but wonder why Im here
Among people I don’t know or like
Why I can’t help but be on my own,
It’s not that I’m afraid, it’s just I don’t know anyone,
I’d rather be back home, where I belong.
But I’m here in the place I truly hate
The place where it happened all that time ago
A place I wished never to go back again

Help me, oh quide me please
I want to find myself and the purpose i have
Assist me, oh comfort me please
I want to find myself and what im worth

I feel so hopeless about the future
What it'll bring, depending on when it ends
I sit in a house where I know people love me
But they don’t seem to catch on to the signals i am sending out
I wonder if I’ll ever move on in my mind
I feel stuck in a moment I can’t get out of
How much I’d like to go and see things I've never seen
Sick of staying among the things that frighten me so much.

Help me, oh quide me please
I want to find myself and the purpose i have
Assist me, oh comfort me please
I want to find myself and what im worth


ummm...i tried. but it needs to be more improved then that. just trying to show you ideas of some sort. the "i want to find myself and who i am" part...well finding yourself is the same thing as finding who you are. So i was trying to think of something else to put in its place. IDK, what do you think?

angel18 01-23-2006 02:06 AM

k cool thanx Crazy Luv i mite change some of the song! i wrote it a long time ago

TrampInaTux 01-23-2006 02:55 AM

Poor song, depressing but in an 'oh my God it's depressing change the track' kind of way. We need more light-hearted things in this forum! Can't people be happy!

Shawn73 01-23-2006 06:11 AM

I wish everyone could be happy.That goes back to Adam and Eve.However,all of us that are unhappy do live though our music also.Angell 18,I think it will be a great song when your done.There are many that have felt the words of your song.To get through hurt and pain in are live we need to speak of it.
All great song start with true feeling.YOU GO GIRL !!!!

bungalow 01-23-2006 06:13 AM

Jehovah's Witnesses are now preaching in Internet Forums?
What has the world come to

TrampInaTux 01-23-2006 06:20 AM

Yes, and not just any Jehovah's witness, a considerably camp one. BE GONE DEMON!


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