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Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 05:43 PM

And then suddenly
 
And then suddenly

I walk out onto the stage
Think i might die right here and now
I see your face within the crowd
And then suddenly there's no one around but you
I perform my heart out
And i do it just for you
Did you see me this time
Did you even notice

Chorus
(A love)
A love thats not suppose to be
(Is what)I have for you
(Was)Suppose to be
(Just sex)
But my feelings grew
Oh they grew far more for me

I walk off the stage
Go to my dressing room
Fiddle around with my stuff
And then suddenly im turned and pushed onto a table
You're there on top of me
Kissing and touching me
You give it all to me
I love and hate this at the same time

Chorus

The very next morning
I see you kissing the new girl
Why must i feel so hurt inside
And then suddenly the light bulb clicks on
Gonna make you envy another
Already found a guy, he's over in the lunch line
I walk over and do my best to work my magic
I shift cause i feel your eyes on me

Chorus

Im walking down the empty hall
To be pushed and held tight against the wall
Its you, who else would it be
And then suddenly your lips are on mine
They glide over my cheeks to my ear and whisper
What the hell do you think you're doing
You just got up and decided to go flirt with that guy
I own you, you're my property


Chorus

I cant believe the words that are slipping through those lips
This is a joke, you cant be for real
You're sucking on my bottom lip once again
And then suddenly it ended as fast as it started
You stare straight into my eyes, then turn to go
As you walk away, i slide down the wall
My distruction has come
And it came in the form of you

Chorus(2 times)





the words in the ()[in the chorus], mean that the words within them are said quickly right after or before

madeinNY 01-22-2006 06:05 PM

Oo I like it very much, it's very straightforward, but so is the thing you're trying to say so it works out.

Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 06:13 PM

Thank you Lex :)
is straightforward a bad thing?

madeinNY 01-22-2006 06:15 PM

sometimes it can be, but it's not here :]

no prob :]

Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 06:22 PM

At least i dont have writers block anymore

this was what i made at that time:
I got writers block
How about you?
Do you have writers block?
Cause i do

Even writing this
Gives me writers block
I ****ing hate you
Writers block

This is like a dark
Swirling pit
i cant seem to climb out of
this stupid sh**

Damn you writers block
For always being in tow
Got nothing left, Im drained
Or maybe im just going insane



then:
Seems to me
That writers block
Has come to visit again

Once again i am drained
Nothing else to write down
On this ****ing piece of paper

But i have all these ideas
Swarming through my head
I cant seem to write them down in words

I wanna scream, wanna shout
Wanna throw a fit
But no, im too mellow to do that ****

Oh ****! Look what i just made
It starts with a "P"
And ends with a oem

Yay! Writers block has moved on
Uhhhh...ummmm
Or maybe im wrong



:laughing:

madeinNY 01-22-2006 06:29 PM

yea...lol that's just bad...haha

Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 06:30 PM

I like the second one better though...but of course they're bad, i had writers block ;)

madeinNY 01-22-2006 06:32 PM

no the first one you posted a liked a lot, but the second one I hate with a passion just because it seems like a rant about something insignificant to the reader/listener.

Crazy Luv 01-22-2006 06:35 PM

i was talking about the second one of the two bad ones

madeinNY 01-22-2006 06:37 PM

there was two in there??

*goes check*

oh yea...well...thats the kind of straiht forward that's bad in songs :)

I don't know...I don't mean to sound mean, do I sound mean right now? I'm sorry if I do.


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