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TrampInaTux 01-23-2006 08:39 AM

Five old men
 
Five old men form a marching band/
They march round the street all hand in hand/
Spreading how nothing is wrong/
they walk around, singing their song/
They are frowned upon/
by those who don't understand/
yet they still keep on singing/
hand in hand/

CHORUS
Scream for your thoughts/
You know they can't talk/
they need your lips/
to express, impress, DISGUST!/

Five old men in their marching band/
They march around town all hand in hand/
Spreading how they have been convicted/
of crimes that they have never commited/
it's not a crime/
you like what you like/
and while they all like/
the others decide it's their time to fight/

CHORUS
Scream for your thoughts/
You know they can't talk/
they need your lips/
to express, impress, DISGUST!/

The five old men end their marching band/
The civil era is not yet ready in their land/
They hide away at home with their curtains drawn/
just waiting for a revolution to be born/
Banners, signs, and picket lines/
form outside, a sign of the times/
The five old men who once had that marching band/
can no longer walk all hand in hand...

CHORUS
Scream for your thoughts/
You know they can't talk/
they need your lips/
to express, impress, DISGUST!/


EDIT: Possibly the worlds first OAP *** rights songs. I'm quite pleased with myself with all these recent songs. I have never posted a song that I have ever spent a great deal of time on... they have all been thought up on the spot. And now I'm bragging.

Crowe 01-23-2006 05:45 PM

Wait, what is this about? OAP? I just am ignorant to what the song is about. I want to know so I can read it with intelligence :D I would like it a lot more, based just on the song itself... without the last chorus.

babakeatwix 01-23-2006 06:15 PM

So...you wrote this song and you are proud of it. Is that what you are trying to get across?

TrampInaTux 01-24-2006 01:31 PM

It's about Male Old Age Pensioners wanting *** rights. And yes I'm proud of this song. My little EDIT comment at the end was basically me being big headed again.

babakeatwix 01-25-2006 05:51 AM

Are you in a band or something is that why you wrote this song?
Or was it just for your amusement?

TrampInaTux 01-25-2006 10:06 AM

I just write songs... now please tell me whether you liked it or not. It IS the whole point of this forum, y'know...

babakeatwix 01-26-2006 05:54 AM

I'd say... yeah its pretty good.


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