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angel18 02-15-2006 03:46 PM

Confession
 
Confession
My friend called today
He said 'way too long'
Since I talked to you
What did I do wrong?

Truth is I'm afraid
Of all that he might say
And all the wrong I've done
Taking every day.

Let me down
Didn't care
I'm hung out to dry
My confession.
(And now you're here
I abandon fear
All I need is someone to hear
My confession)

I confess to the rest
My short failings
And long winded mauling of truth
And attempts to deceive you
How can I plead
And make you believe
That the penance received
Could cancel the deed
And cast all my sins away, Need some forgiveness

TrampInaTux 02-16-2006 02:39 AM

Absolute rubbish
Woefully Crap
Fukking Disgraceful
U are sh*t
Let this be a lesson be learnt-GIVE UP.

Mama Booze 02-16-2006 04:17 PM

When you were new you writ no better, and I was never mean to you about it, hobo, so pay it forward man ;)

Quote:

And now you're here
I abandon fear
All I need is someone to hear
Best three lines in the whole song...
The song has potential...try to make some metaphors though, ok?
And what's with the "my friend.." songs?

TrampInaTux 02-17-2006 04:00 AM

True, very true, but now that I'm not new I have the right.

Mama Booze 02-17-2006 05:31 AM

lesigh I suppose.


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