Bad names for Jesus because God is a whore
 

I'm being cruel to be kind
by leaving you all behind
I drag you along in my mind games
It's not fair to go insane
I wish you peace in your next life
I wish you peace tomorrow

Shout and scream forever
stuck in a loop to never
I know I seek I find I steal
I am God and this is my seal
Bad names for Jesus because God isn't real
Bad names for Jesus because God never was

If we want to live then let us die
thats the way to make the lovers cry
you left him on the earth tonight
he wished his kids good night
ready to work hard tomorrow
to fuel your Earth you share our sorrow

Bad names for Jesus because God isn't real
Bad names for Jesus because God never was
Bad names for Jesus because God isn't real
For me this is hell on Earth God is no more

this song sound like somebody really hate god and will go to hell right? you swear too much do you?

Wow...do you not like god or something?

Song = Fuc.kin suck...."Turn down the suck knob"

i thought it was cool

its rather strange but highly entertaining.

This is brilliant lyrics, just needs a little bit of editing and it will be great.

I can't say I like it.

It's not too bad in areas where theres actual lyrics involved but the catch phrases of the song are "cheese" at best.

No I don't like God how did you guess?

And this song seems to have split people firmly in the middle. I suppose that it went into the cheese section by the constant repeatings of Bad names for Jesus because God is a whore at the end. Anyway thanks to those who commented, apart from Les Paul. Could you explain why it sucks please?

All I can say is sucks. Unless you are thinking ahead for the next pop movement then that song isn't going to go anywhere further than this board.

Hell! - when this guy has an album Im buying!

Okay okay so I think we've clarified that this song sucks. To be honest I like the verses, but yeah I think the chorus could do with a lot of improvement. Could you guys try and give me more advice though?

in the chorus try one of the two

- focusing on one thing and one thing only.. bringing it to a hole new level

- open up the chorus make it short and sweet, but not too details and clean like the rest of the song..

just my thoughts.

i dont mind it.

It needs a chorus other than that its k

Hell! I'm not.

Yes, change the chorus. I for one am down with the whole god bashing thing, but "Bad names for jesus" sounds like a rubbish playground chant and "whore" just doesn't make much sense (unless its a criticism of omnipresence).

How about:

When Jesus rode a donkey he was riding his dad
Because God is an ass
God is an ass

If you like it feel free to use it!

Haha that is classic. I'm changing the whore part.

Okay then so the whore part is changed. What does everyone think now?

i like it hobo.. you made the song a lot better i think :D good job!

It sounds better now but it still might need chorus I think!

if people who are religous are gonna crit, then they better stop taking offense to everything... freakin hypocrites... its a good song