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Mr Slogan 03-27-2006 11:48 PM

Remember
 

Knock, knock- who's there?
It's me i'm trying to open ya mind.

I've got the remote-moving in the motion
of fast-forward - n - rewind.

I've got my traveling shoes
-n- laced tight care 2 join me?

all equipment needed for the hike
pre=pared for this journey.

We going back in time to correct
what you've missed.

From your touch to ya smell
and even your 1st kiss.

Don't be afraid, don't shiver
there's no more time 4 your tear.

It's time to grow up, be Grown
and face your main fear.

Stand on some choices you made
relieve yourself of pressure and guilt.

I'm saying, get ya-self together
-n- stop crying over spilled milk.

your family was un-fare
and you say they treated you wrong.

But you got through them times
you still living-so keep movin on.

Ex-lovers did'nt care- and you say that they
were showing you this.

If you could change it- i know u would
But baby it's only a myth.

You're past isn't perfect-
you did'nt something now it's back 2 haunt you.

You get the Boomerang- it's your turn
to face the bitter truth.

It's hard to remember all the things
that happened in your life.

The Good or The Bad.
It was a portion of your slice.

We all gamble in this world
and concious voices

We rise We fall. but it's
because of our own choices.

:jailed:

Accept your faults-don't give up or surrender.
Pump ya breaks- 4 a second- take a glance

Can u remember?



Py?on ya heard me

Laces Out Dan! 03-27-2006 11:49 PM

Im sorry ..... but WTF is this ...

DontRunMeOver 03-28-2006 02:06 AM

This is good, nice rhyming and I can imagine how it works in performance. Well, I'm assuming its a rap as there isn't a chorus, but maybe it would also work as a song.

Sorry, got to go. No more details for now.

angel18 03-28-2006 02:20 AM

nice one mr slogan have you thought about my idea? let me know!


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