smallz

Here I am. Solo flight.
Out among the stars.
Sense, it doesn't matter
On a rocket ship to mars.
Gravity can't pull me down,
I've seen to much to fail.
I've found my silence, found my friend.

I can smell, I can taste the air,
Breathing frost on the window.
What a beautiful sight this is!
Oh, how I wish you were here.

Removed from everything,
I'm floating through the air.
I'm lost inside my own
Private lullaby.
Gravity can't pull me down,
I've got the stars to tend.

There's a shimmer of light in my view...
I think of you.

Solitude clears the mind.
I'm happy where I stand.
I'm a million miles from home.
I've found my solace, my friend.
I am 'Starseeker.'
I am 'Daydreamer.'
I am 'Believer.'

These are the lyrics of a song I just recorded, and I think they are my best to date, but I don't know if they are actually any good. I figured this would be a good place to start. Any thoughts?

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angel18

it's weird but for some reason i like it. it's not the type of thing you'd see on this forum!

smallz

Thank you! I like that you like the fact that it's weird, because I try to stay away from regurgitating the same thing over and over again. The song it's set to is a bit different too in that it's more jazz fusion and the song is a little bit trippy as well.

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