Music Banter

Music Banter (https://www.musicbanter.com/)
-   Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry (https://www.musicbanter.com/song-writing-lyrics-poetry/)
-   -   I hope it's all worth it BIATCH (https://www.musicbanter.com/song-writing-lyrics-poetry/15526-i-hope-its-all-worth-biatch.html)

TrampInaTux 04-22-2006 03:09 PM

I hope it's all worth it BIATCH
 
I only realised you were right
when you realised the same thing
when we sat lonely that night
and enjoyed the company we bring
I never allowed myself to get caught up
but now I don't have a choice
now go back to that world with your eyes shut
and let me guide you with my voice

CHORUS
You bring me down and raise me up
I've never felt like this before
And the choices I have made are bad
but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure....

We sat together in awkward silence
neither knowing what to say
conversation shot down with annoying violence
if only we both never felt this way
My feelings are strong but my voice is weak
I'm scared of things that I might awake
and if by any chance it's emotion you seek
then you might aswell leave now for your own sake

CHORUS
You bring me down and raise me up
I've never felt like this before
And the choices I have made are bad
but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure...


Well I like this one, even if I do say so myself. I like the line 'my feelings are strong but my voice is weak' that's probably the greatest line I have written in any song. But I'm just blowing my own horn again.
By the way the BIATCH was just used to draw you in. And look. It's worked.

Rabid Sea Turtles 04-22-2006 03:46 PM

How many songs do you think you have actually made? I'm just wondering because you seem to post songs regularly.

TrampInaTux 04-22-2006 04:00 PM

I don't write them down on paper anymore. Everything you see is fresh off the press, as it were. When I have an idea I make a song about it, type it up on here and post it. It's the best thing to do. You need someone criticising every piece of work you do in my opinion, because that is the only way you will improve. I don't just post my best songs on here or whatever because I think that you people need to see everything so I can improve on all aspects.

Rabid Sea Turtles 04-22-2006 04:06 PM

I would have to agree. That is the only way to know what to improve.

Doc.DGAF 04-28-2006 09:24 AM

I like that, brings up some memories.

smoggey2002 05-01-2006 10:50 AM

Yeh Same As ^ ;-(


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 10:44 AM.


© 2003-2019 Advameg, Inc.