The Foolmaker
 

All comments are appreciated, thanks :D

She's a foolmaker
and a cool faker
she'll make you take her
and then she'll break you

She'll take you tonight
And tell her best lie
with her diamond eyes
on a switch she cries

If you think she cares
and you think she's fair
if you love her hair
fool, she put you there

I run so fast
but it hurts to crash
In her attack
my mind burns to black

I try to laugh
but it turns to ash
And in my last
breath I learn to pass

She's a foolmaker
You cant escape her
She's a timewaster
and a heartbreaker

no feedback?

they are decent